Art
Supplies -
In
the art department at Bowie High School, supplies are being used daily by
students in multiple classes. Because of the continuous use, the art supplies
are in bad condition and need of replacement. I feel that new art supplies are
to be purchased and made available to the many art students around campus.
After
signing up for Art I in hopes of improving my art skills, I was shocked to
discover that the brushes and paints, along with other supplies, aren't
sufficient. The colors in the watercolor palette were mixed together, making
the entire palette unusable and preventing me from completing my project.
How
are students expected to make these outstanding pieces if they don’t even have
supplies to make it acceptable?
The
teachers tell students, including myself, to sign up for contests. I would be
compatible with entering the contests, but an issue is that it takes me too
long to complete my submission.
This
may be partially from my details and precision, but the majority of my time spent
is trying to find a watercolor palette that has all of the colors, or
paintbrushes where the brush doesn’t fall off when I try to wash it off. The
paper we receive can’t withstand the amount of paint being put on it, and I’ve
resorted to bringing my own colored pencils to get my work done.
At
the beginning of the year, all art students were required to pay a
twenty-dollar art fee. I assumed this money would go towards supplies, but
after ten weeks in this class, no noticeable things were updated. The paints
are still a mix of colors and the brushes still come apart while using them.
Another
issue is the sketchbooks. Art students were told they were to be given a
sketchbook for the year that they could complete weekly assignments in.
Everyone I talked to assumed we were getting a real sketchbook, not the stapled
piece of slick paper we received.
I
realize that art supplies are expensive, especially for the amount of students
taking this course. This might be a pull factor for less expensive supplies,
but the current cheap supplies just aren’t cutting it.
This
doesn’t mean that the most expensive paints, colored pencils, or brushes are
needed. For example, a Prismacolor 72-set of colored pencils are approximately
sixty dollars. A watercolor palette can get up to around four hundred dollars,
but most 16-set paints are found for approximately twenty dollars. The art program
doesn’t need the best supplies, but a step up from Crayola can only improve our
work.
In
order to get these new supplies, money has to be gathered to purchase them.
This doesn’t have to come from the teachers or staff. Students can donate a
small amount of money that goes directly towards supplies, or the art program
can host a fundraiser to raise money. If
all classes donate or raise money for supplies, the art program will have
sufficient materials in no time.
Sports
and other common clubs get new equipment, etc. every year, but the less popular
organizations don’t. This needs to be changed. Every class, specifically art,
deserves better supplies and materials to make the program successful.
In
conclusion, I believe that the art program needs better supplies, as the current
materials are falling apart and in need of replacement. For as many students as
there are, this seems like a reasonable request.
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I really enjoyed your story and I think it was really well done. I really liked how you kept giving examples of the art supplies provided to you and I think that really helped persuade the reader. One thing I think you need to work on is providing other students experiences with art supplies. That way its not just your opinion. Your commentary piece was really good.
ReplyDeleteYour article was very well written and really persuaded me as a reader to support your art cause. I really enjoyed how you included you and the other art students' opinions on the supplies expectations. Perhaps you could include a quote from one of your fellow art students to further support your point. Overall, I really liked your story.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your story and I found it interesting. Your writing is very persuasive and I liked how you talked about your experience in art. Your word choice was also really well thought out. The only thing I suggest you could make a little better is listing a few more examples of fundraisers you could use or other peoples experiences in art.
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